March 10th, 2010 by
jack
some that goes with:
'wear the darkness with an empty smile.'sorrow in my tears is in denialThat is not possible because we know nothing about the rest of the poem, what you intend your poem to say, what its structure is (free verse, blank verse, rhymed), etc. I could write a simple poem with that as a semantic unit, but that would establish only my intent, and would be my poem. Do you see? Without a context, your question cannot be adequately answered...watching... hoping... please stay awhile... Wear the darkness with an empty smile
I feel as if my bitter heart has been on trialfor you are only one for me for me for meI would try a perpendicular line in this case.you are the only one for me.
this is what i hear in all songs.(lol)It depends on the rest of the poem. There are many lines that will fit any given situation.
Try, 'to hide the bitterness and love destroying guile'
or, 'with empty heart making lost love vile'#If you have any other info about this subject , Please add it free.# |
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